Make sure you: introduce what the thing(s) is(are)say when and where and how you got it(them)explain why you like it(them)and why it is(they are)special to you
I have got a watch.It is my favourite thing.It is black and looks very beautiful.My father bought it while he was in America.When he came back,he gave me the watch as a birthday present.He said to me,"Don’t waste any time,my girl.Make full use of your time."I like the watch very much because it keeps good time and its how my father’s love to me.Whenever I look at my watch,I will think of what my father has said.
Then I will work harder.
正确遣词造句
我们知道,句子是由单词组成的。用词的正确与否,直接影响到表达。比如,我们能说,My father is tall。但不能说,My father is high。我们能说,Who will speak at the meeting?但不能说,Who will say at the meeting?
我们也知道,句子是表达意思的基本单位。句子不通顺,就不会有好的短文,就不能很好地传情达意。要写出好的句子,必须学习英语的语法,掌握英语的基本句型以及句子的结构,避免汉语的影响。比如,用汉语表达时我们能说"我很爱我的妈妈",而在英语表达时,我们不能说,I very much like my mother,而应该说,I like my mother very much。另外,英语的造句实际上是仿句,你可以学习掌握英语的某一种句型,然后,仿照它的样子造句。